Thread:Haloprov/@comment-10169127-20140926054337/@comment-10169127-20140926060433

"is an vocal song" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "is a vocal song."

"the vocals is sang by Cyua." should be "The vocals are sung by Cyua."

Also, it says the article is a stub and REQUESTS extra information be added. So... I do that and it gets removed. If you want to include a "lyrics only" page, then that is fine. But the overall page for the song itself SHOULD, by default, include as much information as there is about it, no?