Thread:Haloprov/@comment-10169127-20140926054337/@comment-6347835-20140926055553

For the first part, if you have a definitive source, then that's welcome to be added. If you're not sure if it's accurate enough for it, then you can leave it in my talk and I'll think about it.

As for the second section, the extra information isn't really needed as Blumenkranz takes the same layout as the other vocal pages. It's a wikia to show a brief and accurate statement on the article. I also didn't see the "grammatical mistakes" considering your edit only shown added words.